B R O K E N P R I S M

Title: Duties
Fandom: FFIX
Characters/Pairings included: Steiner, Vivi
Rating: PG
Warnings: A few bad words.

Summary: Steiner learns to look for the little things.

For scribe_protra. Written for Manly Request Week.

( Duties )

About this fic:
I wrote parts of this last year for a Christmas fic exchange, I believe for protect_vester. I never liked the tone of it, so I didn't finish it. When scribe_protra suggested Steiner-positive fic, I immediately thought of this, because I liked the concept. I came back to this fic and revised the heck out of it.
I think what I don't/didn't like about it is that it's half in Sev's voice and half in Steiner's voice, rather than picking one. It's me telling a story about Steiner rather than showing Steiner's thoughts. Redoing that would have meant starting from scratch, which I guess I could have done, but didn't.

Anyway, scribe_protra, enjoy.